querying update

Just sent a batch of queries to agents who have a field in multi culture and YA but not totally into fantasy. My friend said I should at least query them since my agent lists are running thin.
I've sent out a new fresh query, although I don't know if its stellar or not. But at least, I've given my best shot after being critiqued in AQuery.com and reading some blogs from the Query Shark. Of course I've even enlisted the aid of my sister, who is a reader and likes to see the real in things. Anyways, I've come up with a query which I think should at least be given an attention to.

bye for now :)